था तुम्हें मैंने रुलाया! November 4, 2006
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हा, तुम्हारी मृदुल इच्छा!
हाय, मेरी कटु अनिच्छा!
था बहुत माँगा ना तुमने किन्तु वह भी दे ना पाया!
था तुम्हें मैंने रुलाया!
स्नेह का वह कण तरल था,
मधु न था, न सुधा-गरल था,
एक क्षण को भी, सरलते, क्यों समझ तुमको न पाया!
था तुम्हें मैंने रुलाया!
बूँद कल की आज सागर,
सोचता हूँ बैठ तट पर –
क्यों अभी तक डूब इसमें कर न अपना अंत पाया!
था तुम्हें मैंने रुलाया!
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Collection: Nisha-Nimantran (Published: 1938)
Hindi Poetry Collection 
this is a very powerful poem that really maks you sad.
i know
this is very touching, realise our mistakes.
this poem makes us think of the futility of petty fights and the remorse that inevitably follows it is a touching ode to lost love.
this poem makes us realise that making mistakes is very easy, but realising it and that too late is too painful.
i can understand the value of this poem.because i am the one who broke someone” heart” and then i realised that it was a great mistake.
this shows that what we want we never get it…SO value the things which you have
nice !1!
very touching.sometime its too late to understand our mistake and things are beyoud rectification. So as Jiya said value what you have before its too late.
very emotional n heartful!
thanks for sharing.
very useful touching and a poem to realize our mistakes. hope the poet comes up with like this poem.
1 of d best poem….
any1 thr who knows abt d poem ” jo beet gayi wo baat gayi ” by harivansh rai bacchan. plz post it.I really need that poem.
“the poem i like most, poem consists of deep thoughts and emotions”
Regards
very near to my heart
Bachchan ji ki kavitao ka shabdo me tarif karna namumkin hai
har kavita dil me ja kar basti hai
this is for hiya who wanted “jo beet gayi wo baat gayi”
Jo beet gayi so baat gayi
Jeevan may ek sitatra tha,
Mana woh behad pyara tha
Woh toot gaya toh toot gaya.
Amber ke aanan ko dekho,
Kitne iske tare toote,
Kitne iske pyare chhoote.
Jo chhot gaye phir kahan mile
Par poocho toote taron ka,
Kab amber shok manata hai,
Jo beet gayo so baat gayi.
regards and love
thanks a lot…
thanx..
I wrote a poem…just wanted to share with you all…
………………VIBHAVRI KA TAMISTRA………………………….
vibhavri ke tamistra mai
khadi hoker avni per
dekh rahi hu sunya ko
wo chaand bhi sthir hai
mujhmai bhi koi halchal nahi
fir kyu duriyaan badhti jaa rahi
mere chehre se komudi hattey jaa rahi
waat mere naitra band kar
mere kuntal se baate kar rahe
meri kaya ko sparsh kar
kisi ke maujudgi ka ehsaas kara rahe
koi waad wiwaad nahi , koi samar nahi
dukh se bhi dukhi nahi hu
fir bhi naitra band karte hi
neer ki dhara beh chali
vibhavri ke tamistra mai
chaand ki dyuti ko dekh rahi
badal mere chaand per cha rahe
andhkaar mai, mai kahi kho rahi…
priyanka
हेल्लो प्रियन्का जी
अपनी कविता सब्के सथ शैर करने के लिये धन्येवाद
आप जरूर हिन्दी कि अच्चि जानकारी रखती होगे तभी तौ इतने सुन्दर शब्दो का उपयोग किया
r.k meena
vibhavri = raat
tamistra = andhera
avni = prithvi or zameen
sunya = aakash
komudi= chandni
waat= hawa
dyuti= roshni
ya this poem expree the time of regret of a person of things which he had done with his beloved one & now he wanted to refuse the life for his mistakes
how many priyanka’s are here ???
hi
nice poem..
how many priyanka’s are here ???
this is a great poem!
कोशिश करने वालों की
– हरिवंशराय बच्चन
लहरों से डर कर नौका पार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।
नन्हीं चींटी जब दाना लेकर चलती है,
चढ़ती दीवारों पर, सौ बार फिसलती है।
मन का विश्वास रगों में साहस भरता है,
चढ़कर गिरना, गिरकर चढ़ना न अखरता है।
आख़िर उसकी मेहनत बेकार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।
डुबकियां सिंधु में गोताखोर लगाता है,
जा जा कर खाली हाथ लौटकर आता है।
मिलते नहीं सहज ही मोती गहरे पानी में,
बढ़ता दुगना उत्साह इसी हैरानी में।
मुट्ठी उसकी खाली हर बार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।
असफलता एक चुनौती है, इसे स्वीकार करो,
क्या कमी रह गई, देखो और सुधार करो।
जब तक न सफल हो, नींद चैन को त्यागो तुम,
संघर्ष का मैदान छोड़ कर मत भागो तुम।
कुछ किये बिना ही जय जय कार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती
जीवन की आपाधापी में कब वक़्त मिला
कुछ देर कहीं पर बैठ कभी यह सोच सकूँ
जो किया, कहा, माना उसमें क्या बुरा भला।
Bahut achhi lagi aksar aisa hi hota hai
This poem is good also helped me in my school.
A beautiful poem full of deep meanings-dedicated to them who lost their loved ones:
Jo beet gayi so baat gayi
Jeevan may ek sitatra tha,
Mana woh behad pyara tha
Woh toot gaya toh toot gaya.
Amber ke aanan ko dekho,
Kitne iske tare toote,
Kitne iske pyare chhoote.
Jo chhot gaye phir kahan mile
Par poocho toote taron ka,
Kab amber shok manata hai,
Jo beet gayo so baat gayi
THIS is very touching poem and it show the present of the world in which everyone is fighting for their own selfish needs.everyone should read this poem
this is very nice poem and it shows the present of our world in which everyone is fighting for their own selfish needs.Everyone should read this poem
TOUCHES MY HEART
Wow! Unmatched.
Congratulations on starting a great effort!
I recently started compiling selected Hindi poetry too, please feel welcome to visit and share your comments:
प्रखर हिंदी साहित्य – सर्वोत्तम काव्य संकलन (http://kavyasankalan.blogspot.com)
Perhaps we can share resources for the betterment of all of poetry!
Good luck!
good poem
i really liked it… awesome poet u r harivansh rai bachhan ji… hats off to u…
wah wah …kirpya http://www.divane.in join kar ke vahan par v aap apne divano ka maan bdayein
wow amzing poem
i loved it
😦
🙂
😀
touched my heart
wow
i love da poem
This is really great poem,i liked it. Any way thanks for the nice comments.
Please send some more on this.
Itr essance of life
a nice poem with full of expressions
dil rupi samandar k seep me moti ki trah sama gayi.thanku…
Vastwik prem ko prakat karti bachchan ji ki ye kavita achchhi lagi.
Can You help me to find hindi poem in english? I am from Poland, I am asking for only english version 🙂
Agar kisi ke pas bachchan ji ki koi bi kavita ho to, pls mujhe email kare…pls
Meenamanoj1488@gmail.com
i love this one. if i was a journalist, show this poem many of times in just a month…. i love it….
can any one give me summary of ‘tha tumhe maine rulaya’?
very nice poems
I kike it
i really love this poem…..
i like this poem…… its heart ❤ touching n we realise our mistakes….. it shows in da world tht eva1 is fightin 4 wht they want n being selfish…..
eva1 should read this poem …………………………………….. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
this poem have taken my heart away from me
Aap ki kabita ne mere dil chu liya
This emotional poem touches my not only my heart but even kidney.
Very meaningful yar.
Very nice
This emotional poem touches my not only my heart but even kidney.
abhao me jivan yapan k liye sangghars karte insan ka sajiv citran hai.
Every person is valuable.
nice
I like ds poem.Thanx to see a glimpes of real life nd also thanx to encourage me
very nice poem thanx to encourage me.
lovely poem………i like it…..!!
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such beautful songs and i am a big fan of harivansh rai bachan.
I read ur contribution
thanks
if u can upload the poem kanu ke prati by kanupriya iIt would be a great favour for me!!!
Its amazing collection
पंक्तियों में दिल की गहराई को उतार कर रख दिया गया है। मन के भावों को शब्दों में ऐसे पिरोया गया है कि दिल की बखानी जुबान की बखानी से ज्यादा गहरी छाप छोंड रही है। शब्दों की इस बखानी से मन व दिल के हर कोने में एक उमंग सी उठ जाती है। वाह क्या बात है। ….
दिल को छू लेने वाली पंक्तियाँ……………
स्नेह का वह कण तरल था,
मधु न था, न सुधा-गरल था,
एक क्षण को भी, सरलते, क्यों समझ तुमको न पाया!
था तुम्हें मैंने रुलाया!