Comments on: पथ की पहचान http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/ The treasure that is there to be explored... Sat, 14 Nov 2009 22:14:37 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: anil bharti http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3388 anil bharti Sat, 26 Sep 2009 07:40:48 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3388 now a days it is must to know how and why to walk to get ours target bachchan poem is a one type of inspiration that can any body change his life now a days it is must to know how and why to walk to get ours target
bachchan poem is a one type of inspiration that can any body change his life

]]> By: aharnish http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3363 aharnish Thu, 10 Sep 2009 12:24:34 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3363 kanadam poem not good .. purva chalne k batohi baat ki pahchan karle ... kaha jaana hai .. jo milta hai wo chalne se nahi ruk jaane se milta chalna to bekar .. kisi ne kha hai.. bole to maine hi kha hai.. "tere ghar aangan me kamal khile the shahstra dal tere antas aakash me timtimate the taarein.. magar tu dekhata rha bahar hi bahar har pal har san manjil dabi padi thi tere peroin ke tale rukta to paleta magar tu dodta rha har pal har shan...." kanadam poem not good .. purva chalne k batohi baat ki pahchan karle … kaha jaana hai .. jo milta hai wo chalne se nahi ruk jaane se milta chalna to bekar .. kisi ne kha hai.. bole to maine hi kha hai..
“tere ghar aangan me kamal khile the shahstra dal
tere antas aakash me timtimate the taarein..
magar tu dekhata rha bahar hi bahar har pal har san
manjil dabi padi thi tere peroin ke tale rukta to paleta magar tu dodta rha har pal har shan….”

]]> By: kusum goel http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3350 kusum goel Mon, 31 Aug 2009 08:07:18 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3350 even i am looking for this poem. pl if you find it send it to me also. thanks even i am looking for this poem. pl if you find it send it to me also.

thanks

]]> By: shrishti http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3291 shrishti Mon, 20 Jul 2009 16:42:15 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3291 hey ppl me in 7th thanxx... m learnin this poetry 4 mah recitation.!! thank u uncle nd aunties..!! luv u oll..!! really helped.. spcl thanxx 2 aashish uncle. 4 completin da stanzaz.. gr8 poem.. hey ppl me in 7th thanxx… m learnin this poetry 4 mah recitation.!!
thank u uncle nd aunties..!! luv u oll..!!
really helped.. spcl thanxx 2 aashish uncle. 4 completin da stanzaz.. gr8 poem..

]]> By: noopur http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3200 noopur Tue, 16 Jun 2009 15:59:24 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-3200 aha anand aa gaya ! school ke dinon mein yah kavita padhi thi aur yaad bhi thi. aaj phir itne salon baad padh kar ji juda gaya. dhanyawad. kya koi ek aur khoi kavita khoj ke la dega ? kuchh is tarah thi.... ek bhakt tha bahut sakht tha kathin tapasya nahin samasya thi uski lekhe jagti mein...... shayad pt. bhawani prasad mishr ki thi.. kisi ko mile to bhej dijiyega aha anand aa gaya !

school ke dinon mein yah kavita padhi thi aur yaad bhi thi.
aaj phir itne salon baad padh kar ji juda gaya.
dhanyawad.

kya koi ek aur khoi kavita khoj ke la dega ?

kuchh is tarah thi….
ek bhakt tha
bahut sakht tha
kathin tapasya
nahin samasya
thi uski lekhe jagti mein……

shayad pt. bhawani prasad mishr ki thi..
kisi ko mile to bhej dijiyega

]]> By: Lakshmy http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2789 Lakshmy Tue, 28 Oct 2008 22:36:17 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2789 thanx ashish thanx ashish

]]> By: Ashish Jog http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2641 Ashish Jog Mon, 16 Jun 2008 18:54:38 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2641 There are still some missing stanzas. I am now giving below the last two missing stanzas again: कौन कहता है कि स्वप्नों को न आने दे हृदय में देखते हैं सब इन्हें अपनी उमर, अपने समय में। और तू कर यत्न भी तो मिल नहीं सकती सफलता, ये उदित होते, कुछ ध्येय नयनों के निलय में । किन्तु जग के पथ पर यदि स्वप्न दो तो सत्य दो सो, स्वप्न पर हि मुग्ध मत हो, सत्य का भी ग्यान कर ले। पूर्व चलने के बटोही बाट की पहचान कर ले। स्वप्न आता स्वर्ग का, दृग कोरको में दीप्ति आती, पंख लग जाते पगों को, ललकती उन्मुक्त छाती। रास्ते का ऍक काँटा पाँव का दिल चीर जाता, रक्त की दो बूँद गिरती, ऍक दुनिया डूब जाती। आँख में हो स्वर्ग लेकिन पाँव पृथ्वी पर टिके हो, कंटकों की इस अनोखी सीख का सम्मान कर ले। पूर्व चलने के बटोही बाट की पहचान कर ले। There are still some missing stanzas. I am now giving below the last two missing stanzas again:

कौन कहता है कि स्वप्नों को न आने दे हृदय में
देखते हैं सब इन्हें अपनी उमर, अपने समय में।
और तू कर यत्न भी तो मिल नहीं सकती सफलता,
ये उदित होते, कुछ ध्येय नयनों के निलय में ।
किन्तु जग के पथ पर यदि स्वप्न दो तो सत्य दो सो,
स्वप्न पर हि मुग्ध मत हो, सत्य का भी ग्यान कर ले।
पूर्व चलने के बटोही बाट की पहचान कर ले।

स्वप्न आता स्वर्ग का, दृग कोरको में दीप्ति आती,
पंख लग जाते पगों को, ललकती उन्मुक्त छाती।
रास्ते का ऍक काँटा पाँव का दिल चीर जाता,
रक्त की दो बूँद गिरती, ऍक दुनिया डूब जाती।
आँख में हो स्वर्ग लेकिन पाँव पृथ्वी पर टिके हो,
कंटकों की इस अनोखी सीख का सम्मान कर ले।
पूर्व चलने के बटोही बाट की पहचान कर ले।

]]> By: Ashish Jog http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2640 Ashish Jog Mon, 16 Jun 2008 18:45:13 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2640 This poetry is not complete. You have left out the last stanza which I am giving below: रास्ते का एक काँटा पाँव का दिल चीर देता रक्त की दो बूँद गिरती एक दुनिया डूब जाती आँख में हो स्वर्ग लेकिन पाँव धरती पर टिके हों कँटकों की इस अनोखी सीख का अभिमान कर ले पूर्व चलने के बटोही बाट की पहचान कर ले. This poetry is not complete. You have left out the last stanza which I am giving below:

रास्ते का एक काँटा
पाँव का दिल चीर देता
रक्त की दो बूँद गिरती
एक दुनिया डूब जाती

आँख में हो स्वर्ग लेकिन
पाँव धरती पर टिके हों
कँटकों की इस अनोखी
सीख का अभिमान कर ले

पूर्व चलने के बटोही
बाट की पहचान कर ले.

]]> By: hiya http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2621 hiya Mon, 26 May 2008 17:28:05 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2621 very true....we all need to know our path... gr8 wrk... very true….we all need to know our path…
gr8 wrk…

]]> By: jaideep http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2562 jaideep Sun, 23 Mar 2008 06:49:32 +0000 http://hindipoetry.wordpress.com/2006/09/30/%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%a5-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8/#comment-2562 Among so many poems, this one I still remember to be in my 7th class course. A few stanzas were still fresh and I wanted to get across the complete one. Thanks Among so many poems, this one I still remember to be in my 7th class course. A few stanzas were still fresh and I wanted to get across the complete one.

Thanks

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