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आभार October 15, 2005

Posted by Jaya in Shivmangal Singh 'Suman'.
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जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

जीवन अस्थिर अनजाने ही, हो जाता पथ पर मेल कहीं,
सीमित पग डग, लम्बी मंज़िल, तय कर लेना कुछ खेल नहीं।
दाएँ-बाएँ सुख-दुख चलते, सम्मुख चलता पथ का प्रसाद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

साँसों पर अवलम्बित काया, जब चलते-चलते चूर हुई,
दो स्नेह-शब्द मिल गये, मिली नव स्फूर्ति, थकावट दूर हुई।
पथ के पहचाने छूट गये, पर साथ-साथ चल रही याद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

जो साथ न मेरा दे पाये, उनसे कब सूनी हुई डगर?
मैं भी न चलूँ यदि तो क्या, राही मर लेकिन राह अमर।
इस पथ पर वे ही चलते हैं, जो चलने का पा गये स्वाद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

कैसे चल पाता यदि न मिला होता मुझको आकुल अंतर?
कैसे चल पाता यदि मिलते, चिर-तृप्ति अमरता-पूर्ण प्रहर!
आभारी हूँ मैं उन सबका, दे गये व्यथा का जो प्रसाद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

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1. Prashant Srivastava - November 12, 2005

I am highly toughed with the poem and believe this is one of the rearest poem which should be spoken to everyone to make the life more beautiful.
Thanks to the writer.
Best compliments,
Prashant London.

Kuldeep Dangi - October 23, 2010

Dear Mr. Prashant
My son is on the verge of completing his M.Sc(infomation Technology Management & Organizational Change) from Lancaster university,UK.He passed his B.E(Computer Science) in first class from Mumbai university.He is 24 years of age & posseses good personality.He is active,hard working & sincere but we have no one in UK to guide & support him.I request you to guide & support him for getting a job in UK.Regards

2. Vivek - January 3, 2006

After a very long time..again got a chance to get this stuff again….one of the best creation in poetry…
Vivek

3. Hemant Kumar Pande - April 4, 2006

I really liked this a lot…
Here we get one lesson of to be thankfull to all those who had helped us in any manner at any point of life…
Hemant”BABA”

4. sprana - July 20, 2007

I like this very much.

5. Sumedha - July 24, 2007

Yes, this is the poem that I have gifted to two persons in my life till now who has helped me to make my life more comfortable. Just a way of expressing my thanks to them. I really love this poem.

6. karan - November 14, 2007

finallyyyyyyyyy i got it cauz i needed it for my project it is perfect

7. Ajay - February 10, 2008

I just love it .Yes,one of my best peom.Thanks for this posting.
God bless You all.

8. ARVIND BISHT - March 16, 2008

If there’s any work in the history of Hindi literature that brings out the most sincere feelings of the author during the last few days of his life and which clearly indicate that the poet had intuited his death, it is ” ABHAAR” only.

9. Tapendu - June 22, 2008

Thanks for remainding me of my schooldays.I got very nostalgic.All of these poems were in CBSE course content.Thanks again.

10. Shikha - November 20, 2008

This poem has the story of every single person’s life. Beautiful work. Thanks for sharing it.

11. Ritika Pande - December 3, 2008

Simple words have the deepest impact. Is what I believe. This poem does just that. Touches you to the core with visuals of your very own life.. The poem belongs not just to the writer but to all of us who read it … thanks …

12. vinni - March 18, 2009

I am completley satisfied when I have read this poem realy I am very thankful of writer thanks lot

this realy true without friends we are alone in this world and everthing is worthless and enoyless

13. Anandmai - July 13, 2010

thanks for giving inspiration….i am a writer too…but not asa good as u…

regards
annie

14. kuldeep kaur - August 4, 2010

god bless my love to inspire my life

15. fairy - August 17, 2010

the poem is heart touching. love it.

16. ashutoha - September 2, 2010

kuch kahne k liye sabbd nai hai

17. jeetesh vaishya - October 19, 2010

W0W…it’s relly great poetry.i like “SUMAN JI’S POEM” some poem has been read in my school life.**हरि ओम…ओम हरि ओम…**

18. anurag singh - January 20, 2011

bahut achchhi kavita hai…jeevan ke sangharson ki sachchaiy hai….

19. ABUL HASHIM KHAN - January 22, 2011

Shivmangal Singh Suman Ji ki Kavita Aabhaar Mujhe Bahut Pasand Hai.
Kafi dinon k baad net pe kavita ko padhne ka awsar mila to usko maine gawana uchit nahin samjha!
Shivmagal ji ke ek ek shabdon ko koto koti dhanyavaad!

20. sugandha - March 28, 2011

क्या पाया, क्या पाकर खोया
क्या काटा और क्या क्या बोया

किस्मत के धोबी ने हमको
हर पत्थर पर जमकर धोया

गर्दन करके कलम मेरी
वो बोले ये क्यों कम है रोया

मेरा सपना डर के मारे
रातों को भी रहता सोया

हमने बड़ी ख़ुशी से
हर एक बोझ जिंदगी का है ढोया

ग़ालिब होते तो कहते
मेरा गम भी कोई गम था मोया

ye poetry maine ek blog par padhi “ranjanathepoet.blogspot.com” i liked it very much. to socha aaplogo ke saath bhi share karu…:)

Sanjay - March 14, 2012

ya its very nice and thanks for sharing with us…

21. kriti khnadelwal - July 4, 2011

i just luv ur poem its wonderful……………

22. Smriti Kalita - September 12, 2011

“Jis Jis path par sneh mila us us rahi ko dhanyavad”–
Really,very nice poem thanking all those who gave us their love in our journey through life.

23. MANAS SAXENA - September 20, 2011

US PATH KO HAE SHAT SHAT NAMAN MERA , JIS PATH PE MILA THA MUJHE SAVERA
RAHI HAIN US PATH KE HUM SAB , PHIR KYUN KISI KO TAAP , KISI KO HAE CHANV KI MADHUR BELA
HAR RAHGEER AYA THA AKELA , NAMAN KAR IS PATH KO VIMUKT HOGA BHI AKELA….
JAHAN DUKHOON KI LAHROON KE VO THAPEDE HAIN…
VAHIN SUKH SE PRAJVALIT ANEKOON DIYE HAIN….
YAHAN KOI SWARTH KI MAYA ME HAE KHOYA ,
KOI NISVARTH BHAV SE MOKSH HAE PAYA….
SAMKAKSH JISKE HAIN VIRANE , JAJVALYAMAN HAIN KAHIN USKE LIYE MAIKHANE….
PHIR BHI JIS KO YAHAN ANDHER HUA , USKO SURYA NE PRAJVALIT KIYA….
USHNA NE JAB DEH KO NAM KIYA , IS PATH KE TARU NE , KIS KO NAHIN YAHAN , VISHRAM DIYA….
US PATH KO HAE SHAT SHAT NAMAN MERA , JIS PATH PE MILA THA MUJHE SAVERA….

IS PATH PAR , RAEN NE KIYA JO TAM KA UDGHOSH , KYA NAHI VYAPIT KIYA VO MADHOSH SAVERA….
ANDHIYOON NE JAB PATHIKOON KO KIYA ATANKIT , VARSHA NE KIYA US GUBAR SE SWATANTRIT…..
JIS PATH PE HAR RAHI AGRASAR HUA , KYUN USKI MAHATVATA KO HAE HAE BHUL CHALA….
HAR RAHI KO HAE ISNE JEEVANDAN DIYA , ANGINAT PATHIKOON KO VISHRAM DIYA….
SPARSH SE JISKE CHALNA SEEKHA , KYUN USKO HAE YUN BHULA DIYA…..
JIS PATH NE ASHAOON KO NAAM DIYA , KYUN USKA HAE YUN APMAAN KIYA….
JIS PATH NE , PATHIKOON KO APNO KA SATH DIYA , USKO KYUN NAHIN UCHIT SAMMAN DIYA…
HAE MERA SHAT SHAT NAMAN US PATH KO…JISNE MUHE YE SANSAR DIYA….
JISNE MUJHE YE SANSAR DIYA….

DIS POEM IS WRITTEN BY ME…..MYSLF IS MANAS SAXENA…
WITH D INSPIRATION OF KAVIVAR SHIV MANGAL SINGH ‘ SUMAN ‘.
CUDNT MATCH WITH D MESMERIZING POEM OF SUMANJI…
BT I WROTE DIS AFTER READING HIS POEM.
HOPE U ALL VIL LIKE AND APPRECIATE IT….THNX…DHANYAVAD.

24. pranjal singh - November 10, 2011

sach a wonderfull poetry showing your wonderful heart.

regards
Pranjal Singh(Lucknow)
09792001023

HAREESH RANA - November 12, 2011

HAREES RANA
such a wonderfull poem………….I HAVE NO WORDS TO SAY ABOUT IN PRAISE OF POETRY………….I AM SPEECHLESS.

MANAS SAXENA - April 8, 2012

THNX BRO….HPPY 2 C UR FEEDBCK..
I’LL CNTCT U…

MANAS SAXENA - April 8, 2012

THNX A LOT…KEEP IN TOUCH… MY MAIL ID IS MANAS.MSD05@GMAIL.COM

25. vineeta - January 27, 2012

I was lukng for this poem since long time.highly touchable to me.

MANAS SAXENA - April 8, 2012

THNX DEAR…IT SEEMS DAT U R ALSO INTERESTED IN POEM WRITING…
IF U HV ANY CREATION OF URS PLZ LT ALL OF US KNO…

NW A DAYS PEOPLE R NT INTERESTED IN ALL DESE STUFF…
VRY FEW PEOPLE R INTO DIS…

26. saurabh ahuja - February 20, 2012

aise diggaz ko dekh ke hi ham nat mastak aur naman kiya
koshish jaari hai barso se wo ham bhi kare jo “Suman” kiye

amazing inspirational poem. I also write poetry not to the standards of Suman sir but do attempt to write good in both Hindi and English at saurabhahuja.com. appreciate if you suggest a platform to make them better and post thereafter.

MANAS SAXENA - April 8, 2012

THNX A LOT DEAR…I WAN 2 TELL U 1 THING ABOUT POETS…ND THR CREATIONS..
DNT COMPARE ANY POET ND THR POEMS BCOZ SABKA MINDSET DIFFERENT HOTA HAE…
V CNT MATCH SUMAN JI…
BT V CN GT D INSPIRATION FRM HIS CREATION 2 WRITE BETTER…LTS DO IT…TC. ALL D VRY BEST.

27. arpita - July 18, 2012

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee manas.thanx

vikas - September 7, 2012

Zara si baat hai hawa ko kon samjhaye
Ki diye se meri maa mere liye kajal banati hai

vikas - September 7, 2012
manas saxena - November 20, 2012

hi vikas, gud1 bro….
v vil b in cntct thru mail ok…my mail id is manas.msd05@gmail.com

manas saxena - November 20, 2012

u shudnt thnx me rather i shud thnk u dat u read my poem…..
thnx 4 ur ‘ NICE ‘ , niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.tc.

manas saxena - November 20, 2012

u shudnt thnx me rather i shud thnk u dat u read my poem…..
thnx 4 ur ‘ NICE ‘ , niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.tc.

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29. Sunita - April 14, 2013

Great poetry, must read for all

30. Sunita - April 14, 2013

Have read this in CBSE hindi textbook, but remembered only the first few lines. Hope it’s still there.

31. Pankti Mishra - June 18, 2013

Abhaar…the best poem I have ever read or heard. It’s fantastic. Touched my heart.

32. Gopesh Nathany - July 29, 2013

A very wonderful poem specially for who are at heights of their life

33. Ranjeet SINGH - December 3, 2013

beautiful poem gives energy
Amazing

34. vivek singh chauhan - September 22, 2014

amazing…


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