प्रतीक्षा October 12, 2005
Posted by Jaya in Harivansh Rai Bachchan.trackback
मधुर प्रतीक्षा ही जब इतनी, प्रिय तुम आते तब क्या होता?
मौन रात इस भांति कि जैसे, कोई गत वीणा पर बज कर,
अभी-अभी सोई खोई-सी, सपनों में तारों पर सिर धर
और दिशाओं से प्रतिध्वनियाँ, जाग्रत सुधियों-सी आती हैं,
कान तुम्हारे तान कहीं से यदि सुन पाते, तब क्या होता?
तुमने कब दी बात रात के सूने में तुम आने वाले,
पर ऐसे ही वक्त प्राण मन, मेरे हो उठते मतवाले,
साँसें घूमघूम फिरफिर से, असमंजस के क्षण गिनती हैं,
मिलने की घड़ियाँ तुम निश्चित, यदि कर जाते तब क्या होता?
उत्सुकता की अकुलाहट में, मैंने पलक पाँवड़े डाले,
अम्बर तो मशहूर कि सब दिन, रहता अपने होश सम्हाले,
तारों की महफिल ने अपनी आँख बिछा दी किस आशा से,
मेरे मौन कुटी को आते तुम दिख जाते तब क्या होता?
बैठ कल्पना करता हूँ, पगचाप तुम्हारी मग से आती,
रगरग में चेतनता घुलकर, आँसू के कणसी झर जाती,
नमक डलीसा गल अपनापन, सागर में घुलमिलसा जाता,
अपनी बाँहों में भरकर प्रिय, कण्ठ लगाते तब क्या होता?
What can I comment? a mere basic human being in comparision to the superman of literature and words as bachchan ji. The only reflected glory I can claim is belonging to Allahabad.
I have been looking for the poem which says somewhat like …mera dushman ban gaya hai nishchal aur nishkapat hona… Can someone give me the full poem? and also the one which says…main hoon unke saath khada jinki seedhi reedh…
hi bandana,
i was looking for the lyrics for ‘main hoon unke saath’ and ‘jeevan ki apadhapi’ too.
I don’t remember the entire poem, but am writing in as much as i can recollect-
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
KABHI NAHIN JO TAJ SAKTE HAIN APNA NYAYOCHIT ADHIKAR,
KABHI NAHIN JO SEH SAKTE HAIN SHEESH NAVA KER ATYACHAR,
EK AKELE HON YA UNKE SAATH KHADI HO BHARI BHEED.
JINKO YEH AVKASH NAHIN HAI DEKHEN KAB TAARE ANUKOOL,
JINKO YEH PARVAH NAHIN HAI KAB TAK BHADRA, KAB DIKSHOOL,
JINKE HAATHON KI CHABUK SE CHALTI HAI UNKI TAQDEER,
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
Would it be possible to get the above in Hindi on the net anywhere?Will be really grateful.Also can we download the mp3 of the recital?
Hi Bandana,
The other poem you’d asked for, is appended in the same archieve, “Kavi ki Vaasna”. and the lines you must be referring to would be ” gar chhupaana chahtaa toh jag mujhe yogi samajhta, ban gaya hai shatru mera, chhal-rahit vyahavaar mera”
hi Geeta ..
pls help me find the hindi script of
main hoon unke saath khadi jo .. can pass the URL ..
read this in school way back & a couple of lines that i remember still manage to scintillate one
sincerely,
Hi Aman,
I just found an audio of the poem ‘main hoon..’, however its only 4 lines. The part that I wrote previously was from what I remembered from the school text.
Cheers
Nirbhay hokar ghoshit karte jo apne udgar vichar,
jinki jivha per hota hai hai unke antar ka angaar
nahin jinhe chup kar sakti hai aatatayiyon ki shamsheer
main hoon unke saath khadi jo seedhi rakhte apni reedh
hi all,
the following url will give u the audio recitation of”main hoon unke saath khadi jo seedhi rakhte apni reedh”.copy n paste it to listen to the recitation in amitabh bachchan’s voice.
bi n thankz!!!!!
http://www.esnips.com/doc/5c6efb64-82e7-4ab0-b1f0-a41a0378bdea/Main-hoon-unke-saath-khadi-jo-seedhi-rakhte-apni-reedh
“MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.”
——–BY HARIVANSH RAI BACHCHAN.
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KABHI NAHIN JO TAJ SAKTE HAIN APNA NYAYOCHIT ADHIKAR,
KABHI NAHIN JO SEH SAKTE HAIN SHEESH NAVA KER ATYACHAR,
EK AKELE HON YA UNKE SAATH KHADI HO BHARI BHEED.
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
NIRBHAY HOKAR GHOSIT KARTE JO APNE UDGAR VICHAR
JINKE JIVVAH PAR HOTA HAI UNKE ANTAR KA ANGAR
NAHI JINHE CHUP KAR SAKTI HAI AAT TAHIYO KI SHAMSHEER
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
NAHI JOOKA KARTE JO DUNIYA SE KARNE KO SAMJHAUTA
UNCHE SE UNCHE SAPNO KO DETE REHTE JO NEUTA
DOOR DEKTE JINKE PAINI AANKH BHAVISHYAT KA TAMCHEER
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
JO APNE KANDHO SE PARVAT SE BAADH TAKKAR LETE HAIN
PATH KI BADHAON KO JINKE PAON CHUNAUTI DETE HAIN
JINKO BAANDH NAHI SAKTI HAI LOHE KI BEEDI JANJEER
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
JO CHALTE HAI APNE CHAPPAR KE UPAR LUKA DHAR KAR
HAR JEET KA SAUDA KARTE JO PRANO KI BAZEE PAR
KOOP UDDADE MEIN NAHI PALAT KAR JO PHIR TAKA KARTE TEER
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
JINKO YEH AVKASH NAHIN HAI DEKHEN KAB TAARE ANUKOOL,
JINKO YEH PARVAH NAHIN HAI KAB TAK BHADRA, KAB DIKSHOOL,
JINKE HAATHON KI CHABUK SE CHALTI HAI UNKI TAQDEER,
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH
TUM HO KAUN KAHO JO MUJHSE SAHI GALAT PERTH LOTO JAAN
SOOCH SOOCH KAR POOCH POOCH KAR BOLO KAB CHALTA TOOFAN
SERTH PERTH WOH HAI JISPAR APNI CHAATI TAANE JAATE VEER
MAIN HOON UNKE SAATH KHADI JO SEEDHI RAKHTE APNI REEDH.
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comment??? i think it is not right for a 10 year old girl like me 2 comment on a great poem written by a great poet like bachchan ji.
i’m thankful that i got the poem i was searching for-”maain hoon unke saath khadi”. I had written my first poem in hindi just a few months back.it goes like this-
SHIKSHA HAR BACHCHE KA ADHIKAAR,
KARNA HAI SAPNON KO SAAKAR
CHOONA HAI OONAHAIYON KO
KARNA HAI ROSHAN APNA NAAM.
REST I LOST IT .
MY TEACHERS SAID IT WAS MARVELLOUS AND SELECTED IT FOR
HINDI POEM RECITATION COMPETITION.
IT WAS MY FIRST POEM AND EVERYONE PRAISED IT.BUT UNLUCKILY I LOST IT. IT’S ABOUT THE SOCIAL EVILS STILL PREVAILING IN INDIA AND STOPPING THE CHILDREN TO TRY THEIR BEST.IREQUEST THE VISITORS OF THIS SITE TO COMMENT ON THE 8 LINES OF MY POEM.
YAAH!! I WRITE FANTASTIC ENGLISH POEMS. NOT ME, MY TEACHERS SAID THIS.
REGARDS,
KAVYA
i don’t like this site at all……no poems is found in this site….nothing is there in this site……..this site should be closed ….i hope it will………..
arre bhai, its a blog! (not a site)
and as a blog, its impressive! so there is no point in closing it, and if u ask me about these poems, i like it. And i hope others also like it!
Hi Every body . Just came across this blog and like the poems and stuff posted here. I am a development professional presently serving Eye care sector in Uttrakhand. I have recently sketched feelings of beneficiaries of our program as my poem. I wish to share these lines with you all dedicating these lines to my men in field.
Tera Mei Kese Karu Ada Sukriya..
Tera Mei Kese Karu Ada Sukriya,
Meri Ankhon Ka Noor Hei Tune Lautaya.
Khada Tha Mei Budhape Ki Dahleej Pe,
Jindagi Ke Akhree Kuch Din, Liye Lease Pe.
Na Koi Muje Puchta, Na Mei Kuch Kah Pata,
Sakti-Heen Sarir Ko Liye, Mei Kahan Jata.
Budhi Ho Chali Ankhon Mei Meri, Najar Ka Badal i Aa Gaya,
Jeerna Pade Jism Ko Mere Aur Apahij Bana Gaya.
Tu Jo Aya Gaon Mei Mere Asha Kiran Le Aya,
Dhundlati Meri Duniya Mei Naya Savera Le Aaya.
Beta Mei Tera Kese Karu Ada Sukriya,
Meri Ankhon Ka Noor Hei Tune Lautaya.
Bachpan Se Ab Tak Mene ii,
Jeevan Mei Bas Dukh Hi Dekhe.
Meri Bimari Meri Gareebi,
Door Ho Gaye Mere Kareebi.
Bade Chaav Se Bani Thi Dulhan,
Par Pyar Nahin, Mila Utpeedan,
Chot Mili Mujhe, China Sukh Sara,
China Mera Lal, Meri Najar Ka Tara.
Kese Mei Ladti, Lachar Sarir Ke Sang
Mei To Bus Hasti, Mansik Tanav Ke Sang.
Teri Seva Se Mujhme Hei, Naya Hosla Aaya,
Drishti De Tune Mujhe, Hei Swablamb Banaya.
Bhai, Tera Mei Kese Karu Ada Sukriya
Meri Ankhon Ka Noor Hei Tune Lautaya.
Doorasth The Hum iii, Jungalon Pahado Me Base,
Sahrikaran Se Kisi Tarah Apni Sanskriti Bachaye Rakhe.
Durgam Elaka Hei,
Visam Hei Jindagi,
Suvidhaye Nahi Yahan,
Kast Humari Niyati.
Vradh Jo Hum Hue, Bojh Ban Gaye Parivar Par,
Najar Kuch Aaata Nahi, Beth Gaye Thak Har Kar.
Kho Gayi Aas Apni, Khone Ko Tha Swabhiman Hamara,
Prabhu Ki Kintu Kripa Thi Hum Par, Tune Diya Niswarth Sahara.
Drishti Jo Mili Hei Humko, Laut Aaya Samman Hamara,
Khud Sambhle, Sisu Sambhale, Ghar Ko Mila Marg Darshan Hamara.
Beta, Hum Tumahara Kese Kare Ada Sukriya
Hamari Ankhon Ka Noor Hei Tumne Lautaya
Aditya has always been coming us with brainstorming poems touching common man’s heart. It is actually the sheer emptiness in his life that drives him towards poems. I concur that Aditya needs a place that motivates him towards penning down his poems. This isn’t the correct place to praise him poems but didn’t find any suitable as this.
dil diya hai jaan bhi denge ae sanam tere liye
dil ka har kuch daan bhi denge e sanam tere liye
hi dear
how r u
can u call me
can i call me
if no what use of mobile
is it the only fragile
ya I m agree with Kavya. ‘comment’ is probably not the right word for the words which we are posting here or better to say we do not have the ability to comment on a poet like Harivansh ji. his mesmerizing poems….. surely mindblowing.
PYAR HAIN
TO SABKUCH HAI
PYAR NAHI HAI
TO KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
JAB KISI SE PYAR HO JATA HAI
TAB YEH EHAS BHI HO JATA HAI
PYAR ME HI SABKUCH HAI
MAIN JANTA HU
MERE PYAR ME PAGALPAN HAI
MERE CHAHAT ME PAGALPAN HAI
MERE INTEZAR ME PAGALPAN HAI
MAIN TUMHE BAHUT CHAHTA HU
YEH AKELAPAN YEH PAGALPAN
MAIN AUR BARDAST NAHI KAR SAKTA
AJ MUJHE KUCH KAHNA HAI
PYAR HAIN
TO SABKUCH HAI
PYAR NAHI HAI
TO KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
HA, MUJHE TUMSE PYAR HAI.
PYAR HAIN
TO SABKUCH HAI
PYAR NAHI HAI
TO KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
JAB KISI SE PYAR HO JATA HAI
TAB YEH EHSAS BHI HO JATA HAI
PYAR ME HI SABKUCH HAI
MAIN JANTA HU
MERE PYAR ME PAGALPAN HAI
MERE CHAHAT ME PAGALPAN HAI
MERE INTEZAR ME PAGALPAN HAI
MAIN TUMHE BAHUT CHAHTA HU
YEH AKELAPAN YEH PAGALPAN
MAIN AUR BARDAST NAHI KAR SAKTA
AJ MUJHE KUCH KAHNA HAI
PYAR HAIN
TO SABKUCH HAI
PYAR NAHI HAI
TO KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
HA, MUJHE TUMSE PYAR HAI.
PYAR HAIN
TO SABKUCH HAI
PYAR NAHI HAI
TO KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
JAB KISI SE PYAR HO JATA HAI
TAB YEH EHSAAS BHI HO JATA HAI
PYAR ME HI SABKUCH HAI
MAIN JANTA HU
MERE PYAR ME PAGALPAN HAI
MERE CHAHAT ME PAGALPAN HAI
MERE INTEZAR ME PAGALPAN HAI
MAIN TUMHE BAHUT CHAHTA HU
YEH AKELAPAN YEH PAGALPAN
MAIN AUR BARDAST NAHI KAR SAKTA
AJ MUJHE KUCH KAHNA HAI
PYAR HAIN
TO SABKUCH HAI
PYAR NAHI HAI
TO KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
HA, MUJHE TUMSE PYAR HAI.
i want to know more about you
happy teachers day to all the respected teachers
hie
i could feel the sensitivity brhind writing such a gud poem………keep it up……
क्यूँ है और क्यूँ नहीं यह प्रशन अब रहने दो।
क्यूँ है और क्यूँ नहीं यह प्रशन अब रहने दो।
निरापद नहीं कोई दिशा,प्राकाष्ठा ना बांधो कोई,
उछाह में भी है विषाद,छ्दम मुख ना साधो कोई।
वो अम्रित नही गंगाजल नही,विश है उसको बहने दो,
क्यूँ है और क्यूँ नहीं यह प्रशन अब रहने दो।
वो हाथ जो रक्त्त में सने,परमार्थ कैंसे लिख रहे?
दिग्भ्रमित कर पीडियो की,भवनो को भग्नावाशिष्ट कर रहे।
आग्रह नहीं वह स्वांग है,ना सुनो उसे बस कहने दो,
क्यूँ है और क्यूँ नहीं यह प्रशन अब रहने दो।
हर दिये की लौ पर यहां आशियाना एक जला,
अनुकम्पा ना कोई जगी,और धष्ट मन प्रसन्न हुआ।
मर्म्भेदी घाव अहेतुक नहीं,ये खुद के बोए बीज हैं ,
यूथ्भ्रष्ट को कोइ सुख नही,जान कर भी करील को,
ना मशाल से ना जलाया कभी,तो ये घाव स्वंय मेरे ही हैं,
मुझको ही इन्हे सहने दो।
क्यूँ है और क्यूँ नहीं यह प्रशन अब रहने दो।